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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
11 hours ago
misselleemme.epyhelps Do you want to see me go live? join me on saturday at 9am pst where i will talk to you about our reviewing process, things i've learned as an author, and a new fun game we will be starting in the coming weeks (when things have calmed down for us a bit). i will also answer any questions you want to ask me directly about myself, my projects, or my adventures in writing. if you want to leave questions below feel free! i will add them to my list! looking forward to speaking to you all! ~xo elle #episode #episodechooseyourstory #episodeinteractive #episodeapp #live #goinglive #misslmxx #joinme #leavecomments
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
5 days ago
misselleemme.epyhelps I need to apologize in advance - i'm going through the ringer with my health. as you all know i had the flu at the end of july. well the flu set off strep and just when i thought i was on the mend apparently the antibiotics didn't work and my strep is back!! ugh!! on top of that i have a wedding to attend this weekend!! all of this to say that i may be a bit behind on my reviews this round but i will get them out asap!! i apologize for the delay but i promise to give each and every story i review my complete attention to help your stories grow and develop!! thank you for your patience!! ~xo elle #honestreviews #episodereview #misslmxx #episodechooseyourstory #episodeinteractive #episodelife #writinglife
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em_episodes

@em_episodes

Em Ahsain ♡
6 days ago
em_episodes Keep your eyes peeled for sneak peeks and more fun for a joint venture i'm working on with @misslmxx 😉😉😉 . don't worry though!! almost done chapter 10 of once upon our yesteryears 😊 . #episode #episodeinteractive #choseyourownadventure #emepisodes #romance #writer #author #createyourowncharacter #misslmxx #emepisodes #misselleemme #misselleemme
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misslmxx

@misslmxx

MissLMxx
2 weeks ago
misslmxx Another frequently asked question is: what's next? well i'm happy to answer 😊!! • a different kind of guilty is still being worked on. it's still a bit until its conclusion. i'm having a lot fun writing a cliche and doing two love stories in parallel with each other. it's an interesting dynamic to write and a new challenge! • i'm currently working on a collaboration comedy/ adventure with the very talented @em_episodes. i'm hoping to get a sneak peek out later this week. • i'm story boarding another drama that will be in limelight. as i get closer to writing and/ or release i'll give more details. • when i'm not writing i'm helping other authors @misselleemme.epyhelps - go check it out! • i'm working on getting no looking back completely up on inkitt. • i'm re-writing a rejected manuscript to get it back out to agents and publishing houses. • busy, busy #writer!! stay tuned for my upcoming ventures!! i update on here regularly! and thanks for keeping those questions coming! i love hearing from you all 😘❤️ xo #misslmxx #episodechooseyourstory #episodeapp #author #writing #authorlife #episodelife #lovemyreaders #read #share #follow
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misslmxx

@misslmxx

MissLMxx
2 weeks ago
misslmxx Coming soon - myself and @em_episodes are proud to present our collaboration adventure story: parallelogram • • "when reality isn't good enough" • • stay tuned to our pages for sneak peeks! #episodelife #episodeapp #episode #episodechooseyourstory #fantasy #episodefantasy #comingsoon #authors #lovewriting #collaboration #emahsain #misslmxx #follow
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misslmxx

@misslmxx

MissLMxx
2 weeks ago
misslmxx Here is a faq on no looking back: • • 1. where did the idea come from? no looking back is actually an adaptation from a novella i wrote when i was seventeen. i actually changed quite a bit to make it fit episode guidelines and throw in some suspense the novella didn't have. the novella is actually more a drama/ romance than mysterious. you can read it on inkitt (see the link in my linktree) but be warned - it's 18+!! • 2. will you add customization? in short, no. the reason being i is that i feel like as readers you would be disappointed if you made her and then i changed her hair colour and style on you. • 3. why don't you talk about the depression she would be feeling? i commend writers who throw mental disease into their stories. i don't because i feel like the reactions that episode has just don't do justice to what they are really like. as a writer i just don't feel like i could do a good job on episode and so i try to only elude to these things or have them be very small parts of my story. • 4. will you write more mysteries? maybe. to be honest this was my first ever mysterious type story. it was fun though! stay tuned to my page; i try to update on my future plans as much as possible on here. • 5. do you really think convicts can change? i think given the right rehabilitation and the right supports people can change. that being said every judicial system is different and every person is different. the nice thing about writing fiction is that you can make anything happen - you can create the perfect world. • • thanks for tuning in!! don't forget to share no looking back on your page and if you haven't - give it a read! #episode #episodespp #episodechooseyourstory #episodeinteractive #author #nolookingback #misslmxx #writing #completestory #read #readnow #share #follow
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
2 weeks ago
misselleemme.epyhelps Welcome to part 3 of our 3-part #writertiptuesday special!! we are putting together everything we learned about labels, gains & conditions!! . part 1: labels part 2: gains and conditions part 3: putting it all together!!! . stay tuned! . #misslmxx #emepisodes #misselleemme #honestreviews #summarysaturday #shoutoutsunday #authortipthursday
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misslmxx

@misslmxx

MissLMxx
2 weeks ago
misslmxx Head over to @misselleemme.epyhelps and let us know what you think of our page. that's right -- review the review page run by myself and @em_episodes ! we want to hear from you if our page is helpful and how we can improve to better help authors! #episode #episodelife #helpusimprove #butmaybeyoustraightuploveus #followus #follow #episodeinteractive #emepisodes #misslmxx #loveourfollowers
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
2 weeks ago
misselleemme.epyhelps Welcome to part 2 of our 3-part #writertiptuesday special!! check out our previous post on labels! . please note: in the red outfit option, just pretend i made the character change into red! it was a copy and paste of the above condition and i overlooked it! sorry 😳 ~xoxo emme . part 1: labels part 2: gains and conditions part 3: putting it all together!!! . stay tuned! . #misslmxx #emepisodes #misselleemme #honestreviews #summarysaturday #shoutoutsunday #authortipthursday
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
2 weeks ago
misselleemme.epyhelps Welcome to a 3-part #writertiptuesday special!! due to our lack of posting in writer tips (@em_episodes had a few other commitments and couldn't post for a few weeks), we have come out with a 3 part special that'll all be posted today!!! . part 1: labels part 2: gains and conditions part 3: putting it all together!!! . stay tuned! . #misslmxx #emepisodes #misselleemme #honestreviews #summarysaturday #shoutoutsunday #authortipthursday
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episodians_united

@episodians_united

✿Episodians United✿
4 weeks ago
episodians_united What is your instagram username? * em_episodes do you have any other social media accounts? * misselleemme.epyhelps what is your name? * em how old are you? in my 20s where are you from? canada when did you first start writing on episode? * march 2017 what made you want to start writing? * i have been writing for the last 15 years and found episode to be another creative outlet. what was the first story you published? * thr intricacies of intimacy list any other stories you have written. * once upon our yesteryears what is your favorite story you have written? * once upon our yesteryears do you like writing?* yes what is your favorite part about writing on episode? * weaving together an intricate story! what is your least favorite part about writing on episode? * gains and conditions starting out as an episode writer, what did you struggle with? * conditions, such as the if elif else commands. what would you tell a new episode writer? * the forum and faq are life saviours!! it helped me learn all that i needed to learn :) what are your hobbies? * reading and writing are there any stories you would recommend? * no looking back by #misslmxx, stardust sky by @k.m_episode, cetrinda by @smk_episode, tangled love by @ashlynnehartley are there any authors you would recommend? * there are too many amazing authors! what is your opinion on diversity in episode? is it there? do they need more diversity? * it's slowly getting there with the addition of diverse clothing and character features. i do wish we had more such as including disabilities and various age groups. what does diversity mean to you and how can authors incorporate that into their stories? * diversity is everything: the person, where they are from, their background story.. etc. by allowing a) character customization we allow the readers to create a character that looks like them, b) utilizing all outfit and body style choices the portal gives is and c) by not being afraid of experimenting and incorporating, we can include diversity in our stories. anything else you want to add? continued below⬇️
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em_episodes

@em_episodes

Em Ahsain ♡
4 weeks ago
em_episodes
@misslmxx and i will be opening mini reviews on our page @misselleemme.epyhelps in a few days!! due to personal and writing obligations, our longs are on hold... if you has a long review request from our last batch of requests, it'll be posted by tomorrow!! . #episode #episodeinteractive #choseyourownadventure #emepisodes #romance #writer #author #createyourowncharacter #misslmxx #emepisodes #misselleemme
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
last month
misselleemme.epyhelps Misselleemme presents~ . the butterfly, by @thebutterfly_episode . i would first, before the spotlight, like to take a minute to share how the author of this amazing story has had multiple reviews done on her story by a number of wonderful reviewers. elle & myself have had the honour & privilege to read the butterfly in its early stages. the author has taken all pieces of advice that all reviewers have given and has applied it to the butterfly. the story that you read today is not the same story that you would've read even just two weeks ago. that is the power of writing: it's ever changing. this story was remarkable and fantastic to begin with, but @thebutterfly_episode is continuously taking the advice given and applying it to the story, making it a better version of itself each and every time! and now, without further ado, onto the spotlight! . q~ what and/or who inspired you to write the butterfly? a~ the butterfly is a really big mix of influences. i love spy/secret agent films and i love english humour. i wanted to write something very english but dramatic and romantic, full of action. a lot of inspiration is taken from classical texts, operas, and my own life (less the action and more the romance side!). i also wanted to write something with a male lead who wasn't an alpha male or chauvinistic, as the plot progresses you see that cayden is very progressive while anette transforms! . q~ do you think there are hidden gems like yours on episode that deserve more attention? can you name some? a~ dream job: s***e to the rhythm by @olla.c.episode is definitely a hidden gem. it is an underrated story that i like! also, being perfect by @arrows.episode! it's a really, really good story with amazing directing and it's almost poetic in the way it's written! . q~ give us a fun fact about yourself! a~ i can lick my elbow! . ~xoxo emme . #shoutoutsunday #misslmxx #emepisodes #misselleemme #honestreviews
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misslmxx

@misslmxx

MissLMxx
last month
misslmxx Wow! the reads are steadily going up and i'm so grateful - thank you to my fans who leave me messages and to everyone who has taken time to read my stories ❤️. if you haven't already get lost in the mystery and lust of no looking back ... and ... enjoy the not so typical high school love story a different kind of guilty with some of those favourite high school story cliche characters. you can only find these gems on #episodeinteractive #episode #episodelife #episodechooseyourstory #episode #episodeauthor #misslmxx
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
last month
misselleemme.epyhelps **note: this review is of my own opinion & is meant to be constructive criticism** . story: dream job: carousel . summary: you must complete the carousel hunt to pursue your dream job – the carnival drummer. but nothing is as it seems… . author: @episode.chelle . review type: mini . plot [10/10]: okay what?! this plot is fantastic! you have all the components required to make an amazing story: a badass main character, an interesting back story (what’s up with the carousel?!) and her fatal flow (the reflection is so amazing!!) this plot is nothing that i’ve seen before. you had me gripped the entire time! . chapter length [5/5]: perfect length! . spelling & grammar [10/10]: no mistakes or errors found! . directing & choices [10/10]: your directing is phenomenal! i love the carousel points and how it unlocks outfits. i love the zooms, pans, and spot placements! i love the usage of choices to either add or take away carousel points which impact different things in the story. i just plain loved everything! . overall [35/35]~ 100% you are the first perfect score i’ve given, and for good reason too! this story is amazing! i was literally anxiously tapping (but slowly, to not mess up your zooms!!) trying to figure out what happens next! i love that you jumped right into the plot without a long drawn out opening… your usage of sounds is perfect; it enhances the story in just the right way… what i am trying to say is, i cannot wait to read more of this hidden masterpiece of a gem! xoxo~ emme
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
last month
misselleemme.epyhelps **note: this review is of my own opinion & is meant to be constructive criticism** . story: the velvet town . summary: emily leaves her happy home. during the path towards the velvet town she meets a hot, mysterious guy. will he help her? . author: @emilia.writes . review type: mini . plot [9/10]: your plot was very interesting! girl runs away from home and you are navigating your life in a strange new american land! you honestly made me feel like i was in the story!! . chapter length [5/5]: perfect length! . spelling & grammar [8/10]*: a couple of things right off the bat: in your summary, you should have “a hot guy” instead of “an hot guy”. ‘an’ is used, as opposed to ‘a’, when the proceeding words begins with a vowel (for example an apple and a banana and an orange and a grape). some minor spelling errors as well: axact > exact & nostrills > nostrils, and grammatically (in your warning in the beginning of chapter 1) it’s your money is important vs money are important. i can see where you are coming from, money is plural as you spend money (not monies), but used in that sentence it should be “money is important”. you wanted a focus on spelling and grammar. to be honest, your grammar had minimal errors as well as your spelling! a super easy fix to it would be to copy your entire script into a word editing program (such as microsoft word), and it’ll catch the really quick fixes (like an vs a). otherwise, in all honesty, everything was great! . directing & choices [10/10]: girl, i don’t know what to say! your directing is amazing, your spot directing is so clean & your choices?! at first i was like oh—not a lot of choices but my choices have literally immediate consequences. the concept of each choice impacting my savings?! brilliant! you did an amazing job with your directing and style of choices. phenomenal! in chapter 1, i literally replayed it to see what happened if i spoke to the streetwalker first vs the homeless guy! that feat alone; to have a reader have the desire to go back and read a chapter just to see what the alternate outcome would be is amazing! . continued in comments
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
last month
misselleemme.epyhelps **note: this review is of my own opinion & is meant to be constructive criticism** . story: getting back up . summary: ambused in an alley… i said no. he didn’t stop. one night. now? he’s stuck in my life… (rape story). . author: @heehaw101 . review type: mini . plot [9/10]: your plot is really good & it’s a very interesting topic. it touches on a very serious topic of r**e & i like how you handled it!! you made it very evident that r**e isn’t how the victim acts or the clothes they wear, but a choice of the abuser. you did a fantastic job in fleshing out this plot, especially since it’s your first story!! you wanted a specific focus on plot... i think this plot is amazing & i want to thank and congratulate you for choosing such a delicate subject!! . chapter length [4/5]: no complaints on the length!! . spelling & grammar [9/10]: i literally did not see any spelling or grammar errors!! one small suggestion i would have is watch your syntax; reading “don’t worry my queen” doesn’t flow naturally as a reader. i feel like a cute pet name like that is used sporadically (at best)… for example: “i’d do anything for my queen”, so using it like a title and not a pet name exactly. otherwise, your spelling and grammar were on point! . directing & choices [7/10]: you mentioned that you are new to coding, so taking that in to account i think you did great! just a few things: try and “act out” the exit and entrance scenes. i found that popped between different backgrounds a lot that sometimes i was trying to figure out if i was still in the kitchen, or back in the bedroom talking to leo. also, i would suggest introduce a few more choices to include your reader in the story experience and you. . overall [29/35]~ 82% overall, i think the idea behind your story is really good! you aren’t glorifying rape, which i’ve seen too often, and you’re working on the victim and how she is coping. your plot, chapter length & spelling and grammar are amazing. just a few small minor details in directing (as you read above), and with the inclusion of more choices, you have yourself an amazing story!! xoxo~ emme
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misslmxx

@misslmxx

MissLMxx
last month
misslmxx A different kind of guilty is now available only the #episodeapp get swept up in my newest romance! if you like high school cliche stories than you'll love the little cliches i added in. but it wouldn't be a #misslmxx story without a twist, and a little mystery. enjoy! #episodeinteractive #episodelife #episodechooseyourstory #episode #episodeauthor
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misselleemme.epyhelps

@misselleemme.epyhelps

Elle & Emme ~
last month
misselleemme.epyhelps **note: this review is of my own opinion & is meant to be constructive criticism** **note: all errors are noted from chapter 1. character development is monitored until the final chapter read—for anything you’d like to correct, please consult the recommendations made for chapter 1** . story: my betrayed best friend . summary: jessie was betrayed by her best friend.. what will happen after her best friend betrays her? . author: @j.k_episodes . review type: long . plot [8/10]: i love stories like this! high school / middle school drama, mean girl vs normal girl, cool vs… what’s-not-socially-viewed-as-cool… i was immediately pulled in to why valentina would betray jessie… and for what reason?! they literally seemed like best friends in preschool and all of a sudden, miss. crop-top-long-straight-hair-with-bangs is being a rude little jerk! one thing i would say that stood out to me was that it seemed a bit unrealistic there was only 1 child in the school… maybe if you incorporated more children but had valentina be the only one to talk to jessie? another thing: isn’t 17 too young to be living on your own? legal adulthood is 18 in most countries, right? just an observation. . chapter length [4/5]: no complaints on the length!! . spelling & grammar [8/10]: a few things i noticed with grammar, mainly usage of apostrophes for contractions, ie: let’s vs lets. lets read should be let’s read (that is, let us read). there are minimal grammar errors, nothing that takes away from the story—spelling is great, just watch your usage of contractions. . directing & choices [8.5/10]: love your usage of custom backgrounds & sounds!! fantastic eye-catchers… and the dancing girls for the “turn your volume up” bit made me laugh! right off the bat, your spot directing is fantastic—little jessie, mom & dad were perfectly sized! in the 2nd scene of chapter 1, though, mom looked a bit too big for the car. scale her down just a tad :) other than that, your zooms, pans, cuts, spot directing, and idle directing was spot on! amazing!! . *continued in comments*
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